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A nice and short "victory theme" that loops very well. I could easily see this being used in a game.
The ending doesn't sound so much like a finish than it does an extension. If you could add a long note to the end to close it out it would be perfect. Overall, nice work.
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The lyrics, the timing everything was perfect; definitely going in my favorites when I'm done here :D.
The timing of the lyrics and music, to me, was spot-on. Yes, you (te listeners) need to keep up, but when you do it's amazing and feels just right.
I've heard the melody before but it's not enough to bring my opinion and score down. Fantastic job.
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Thank you, glad to hear you liked the lyrics.
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And while it was better, this one isn't bad. I really enjoyed the intro, and when the vocals began they surprisingly kept me interested in the rest of the song.
It's what a metal song should be and I believe you nailed for the most part. The ending didn't quite fit, but the main focus was on the metal itself. Overall it wasn't bad.
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Ok thanks for the review. I'm thinking about changing the ending sometime.
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Don't try to put too much into the song. Let the guitar do most of the work and make the drums in the background a bit more discreet. Don't remove them completely, but space them out at certain intervals during the song.
It's also a very catchy song. However, the drums and guitar sound jumbled and I didn't feel as though they were used as well as they could have.
Overall, a catchy song with a smooth melody and nice beat.
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The singing wasn't bad, in fact if you were a bit louder it would be better. I know it takes courage to sing, which is why I didn't think it was terrible. Your voice sounds good, too.
While the song overall sounds a bit misguided in some places, especially at the end and how you chose to close it off, I take it that was kind of the point given the title of the work.
If you could improve the quality of the recording and work on the timing of the vocals sung with the instruments, that would be great. Overall, while messy, it wasn't bad.
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Wow. thank you very much for your positive coments, i will try to impliment them into my future songs.. please check out my other song Absent but indecisive it has much better quality thank you.
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While somewhat generic, there were a few parts that sounded perfect. It does in fact remind me of a closing theme, and the length is just right for such a song.
It does, however need a bit of variety and the overall quality can be improved, though it's not a big problem.
The beat is catchy and I can see myself dancing to it, if just a little bit. Nice work.
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The lyrics were what I enjoyed the most about this song, and I found the voice to fit very well with the piece as a whole.
The static at the end was shocking to say the least, and wasn't entirely welcome listening to the rest of the song before it.
Overall, an excellent piece of music.
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Thanks, I too like lyrics that are completely random. Sorry for the static. It's horrible when listening with headphones!
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I'm very much liking the style and genre altogether for this music. It's a nice upbeat piece of music that's easy on the ears.
I agree with Coop on the boing, it's a very nice addition to a Techno style. I would recommend making this just a little longer, if just to experiment some more with additional effects.
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glad you liked it :D
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Not a bad piece of music, considering the melody was somewhat bland. Variety always helps in any song.
I can appreciate the vocals, and they were very well done.
This has potential, and you have talent, a bit more effort and it can be great.
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With the vocals being the main theme, you did a good job. However, as others have mentioned, it takes too long for them to start.
The length is perfect, and the both the intro and ending were very nice and well done.
Overall the beat was good, too.
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